Songwriter or Not??

From what I've heard I'm an amazing songwriter this is one of the pieces I'm working on:
     The Music Inside Me
"not everybodys gonna like the way you are
so just pick up your pick and jam on your guitar
im gonna do my own thing
im gonna rock and demonstrate
cuz I know there's something comin out
Cuz its the music inside me and its driving me crazy
and i need to shout cuz its comin out.....

theres more but you know I dont want to make you tired :)

My creations...!!!